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FIRST WRITING.

What is the greatest invention in history? Justify your answer.

Throughout history, many inventions were invented that made life easier for humans, on the one hand, but some also harmed it a lot .

One of the most important inventions for humanity is the clock. Imagine modern civilization without having a sense of time. Time is something that helps us keep track of everything. Another of the great inventions for humanity is the vaccine. The world benefited a lot from the invention of vaccines as its derivatives helped the human to transgress periods of deadly diseases. The vaccine saved us from many dangerous diseases that can have ended humanity. Another invention is the phone that seems to have been born with us, but it was an extraordinary advance when we managed to speak to someone far away. Since then, its evolution is enormous. And keep moving forward. The history of the telephone is also the history of communication.

Finally, if I have to choose between one of these inventions, I would choose, without a doubt, the vaccine, especially at this time when we are living in a health crisis

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SECOND WRITING

Are you afraid of missing out? Explain.

With the development of the Internet, people's social and communication experiences, , have expanded to include a lot of time interacting on social media.

On the one hand, modern technologies (mobile phones, smartphones) and social networking services (such as Instagram, Facebook, or Twitter) provide a unique opportunity for people to engage socially at a lower "cost of admission." On the other hand, mediated communication perpetuates a greater dependence on the Internet. A psychological dependence on being online could cause anxiety when one feels disconnected, leading to fear of being lost or even pathological use of the Internet.

As a consequence, I think that FOMO syndrome is perceived to have influences negative in the psychological health of people because it could contribute to negative mood and depressive feelings in people. I think that we should all quit this addiction that only gives us negative consequences and start doing sports that are much healthier and will help us overcome any addiction.

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THIRD WRITING

Advantages and disadvantages of following a diet.

We are living in a time when it is very fashionable to follow a healthy diet to lose weight and have a better body. It is important to note that a correct diet can be different according to the periods of life (childhood, youth, adulthood) or in certain circumstances (pregnancy, etc.).Today we will see if this is true and we will see the advantages and disadvantages of a diet..

Eat healthy it can be a help to live more time. Obviously, anything is guaranteedwith eating healthy, but there is a great possibility that people will live more time when she eats ina healthy way. Alsopeople that follow a healthy diet are less prone to have overweight.

But a diet have a lot of disadvantages such as eliminate nutrients and cause negative effects in case you keep the deficiency of that nutrient for a long time without replacing it. The most notorious result of strict diets is loss of energy. It is not rare to hear from someone you know who simply does not have the strength to deal with their daily routine or who cannot exercise.

In my opinion, a correct diet, balanced and varied, accompanied by healthy lifestyle habits, is the ideal to achieve a good state of health and it is not necessary to follow very extreme diets that end up damaging the human body.

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FOURTH WRITING

Do you enjoy watching TV series?Explain

At first, I am a great lover of all kinds of series of any genre, then I will talk about the reasons why I like series.

I think it is a think easily accessible, available to everyone and practically free. In general, in the world of series, it shows the modern and cotidian live . And that gives it authenticity. Characters are more real acting in television series (with our miseries) because the characters live a story that can be real ,so that when I watch a series I feel a closeness. Many of the characters or situations can remind me of ourselves, a member of my family or a friend. In addition , in a series there are many topics that any human could perfectly live as an impossible love, a history of terror, etc. It’s important to mention Netflix or HBO, I think they are the best applications to watch all kinds of series .

Finally, answering the question if I like the series, my answer is yes. Personally, I like them because they are less elaborate than the cinema, and more spotaneous, due to their proximity, because their characters end up being like my family and many times, they reflect reality better than the cinema.

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FIFTH WRITING

In your opinion,what is the most serious social problems today?

Currently we have many social problems. However, the one that stands out the most is the covid-19 and it is the subject that everyone is talking about .

In 2019, a new coronavirus was identified as the cause of a disease that was originated in China. I think that we must stay home as long as it takes . We must have individual and social responsibility. In order not to catch it and not spread the epidemic. Saving our lives is an important priority. In addition, from my point of view ,the covid-19 is making all people stay much more united and this forces love between citizens.

The covid-19 is destroying the country's economy due to the enormous expenses caused. Also, the covid-19 is have many social problems such as sadness of people who have to be confined for a long time which they caused a lot of depression.

Finally, I hope that we will soon find a vaccine for this disease and everything will return to the normality. I think that we will defeat this dangerous disease if we all help each other.

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SIXTH WRITING

Would you restrict your time on social media?Explain

New technologies, the Internet and social networks have become indispensable in society and especially on young people.

Nowadays, it is very normal to see a family reunion, a restaurant, many friends … connected to social media. This shows that all people, including me, live in the middle of digital technology every the day. On one hand, I think that due to this addiction, I am leaving out many very important activities such as going for a walk, walking with my friends. .In addiction, this addiction of social networks is making me lose hours of sleep and study . But on the other hand, this addiction are one of the fastest sources of information that exist, making life easier for all of us and permit us to cancel the stress of the day.

Finally , answering the question if I would restrict my time in social media, I think that I should not eliminate the screens of my live, but maintain a balanced digital diet that does not make me limit physical activity or interaction with friends or family. It is essential to learn to manage my time in social networks in a healthy way

“Time is the most valuable thing in the world, wasting time is the biggest mistake” Benjamín Franklin

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What do you think governments should spend more money on?Discuss

The government's money is obtained from many places and we have to invest it in essential things for the state.

From my point of view, the state money should be spent on the organization and protection of the state such as the police and the army which are the people who bring order to the state, construction of public works such as libraries, parks ... essential places for the most needy people. It is also ideal to subsidize companies in crisis, giving them the support they so needed, health expenses, which for me is the most important thing of all because we are talking about the health of citizens. And finally, help needy families who are going through bad times.

However, the state shouldn’t invest money in absurd and unnecessary things such as concerts that don’t contribute anything to the state, organize football games, basketball in which much money is invested and have few benefits except for entertainment.

To sum up , state money is essential and we must know how to spend it. "The path to wealth depends fundamentally on two words: work and savings." Benjamin Franklin

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EIGHTH WRITING

Are you worried about climate change?Discuss

The Earth has already naturally warmed and cooled on other occasions, but the truth is, these cycles have always been much slower, taking millions of years, while now and as a consequence of human activity, we are reaching levels that in other times they produce extinctions in just two hundred years.

I think that the main cause of climate change is global warming that we have to be consistent with what we are causing .This global problem increase in temperature brings disastrous consequences that endanger the survival of the flora and fauna of the Earth, including humans, so I think that the next years they would end in the disappearance of many species. Among the problems of climate change, the melting of the ice mass at the poles, so we will probably end up without ice masses.

From my point of view ,We are living in a very difficult situation and nobody is worried about anything. The government doesn’t worry about implementing necessary measures and citizens hardly care, everyone continues to use cars a lot, even knowing that it is advisable to reduce their use, increase deforestation ... Probably in a short time we will have all the consequences that I cited and there will be no turning back.

Finally, I hope that citizens and politicians will realize this problem and take the necessary measures.

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